Stalled Dreams... This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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   Cardboard boxes

are paralyzed racecars

that never travel beyond

the playroom door




This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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metaphor-mouse This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 29, 2010 at 9:04 pm
woah. this is extraordinarily awesome :D keep it up!
 
Eilatan This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 29, 2010 at 5:31 pm

This is incredible!!!!!!!!!

I'm adding it to my list of favorites, I love how it's so symbolitive, and you got the point across in so few words- that really takes talent. five stars from me, keep writing and congradulations on getting published!!!!!!!!

 
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