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October 3, 2009
By eglantine GOLD, Huntsville, Alabama
eglantine GOLD, Huntsville, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
a robe. you know... a backwards snuggie.


Burn burn fire though the water runs cold;
Inside the fire and the ice do weld;
To coil, to strike, to sink below;
Locked inside this feeling does dwell.

Not inflicted but self-imposed;
Etched on the soul in lines of prose;
Locked and bound but never ceasing;
Wanting to be free but bounds increasing.

Freedom and torment,
Hate of guilt,
Love of love but silence still;
To break the lock my heart endures,
To open mine nad welcome yours.



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eglantine GOLD said...
on Oct. 12 2009 at 8:50 pm
eglantine GOLD, Huntsville, Alabama
18 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
a robe. you know... a backwards snuggie.

hi! this is the author and i'd really like some criticism. i've already noticed some stupid mistakes, like typos, but i'd really love some feed back.

thanks!!


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