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alayapoetgirl BRONZE said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 9:14 am
I like it very much! Even the structure of the poem itself is awesome. However you used "peanut butter sliding down the side of the jar" as a metaphor then you say "falling too fast-". But peanut butter is very stick...and moves slow. I think you could've thought of something different....Other than that, it's a great poem and an especially great topic, love it! And when you get the time check out my opinion essay on animal rights/ vegetarianism
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