I'M Sorry, Really | Teen Ink

I'M Sorry, Really MAG

By Anonymous

   I borrowed

your shirt

the one you call

your favorite

the one you wanted

to wear

next Saturday.

But please,

forgive me,

I look good in green

and it really isn't

your color;

besides,

tomato stains come out

in a wash or two.





Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 3 comments.


on May. 20 2010 at 4:54 pm
Imaginedangerous PLATINUM, Riverton, Utah
31 articles 0 photos 402 comments
Well, I happened to like it. It reminded me of my siblings and me... made me smile. Good job. :)

on May. 20 2010 at 3:54 pm
GreyEyesBlueHair GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Develop interest in life as you see it; in people, things, literature, music - the world is so rich, simply throbbing with rich treasures, beautiful souls and interesting people. Forget yourself." Henry Miller

Duckie430, really? Do you have to be rude? It's published, get over it.

As for the poem. I like it up to "your color;", but I think you could have took a different turn with it. It was a dead end poem. The ending wiped out any emotions I had before the last three lines.

I'll be looking to see different works of yours though so keep writing!


Duckie430 said...
on May. 20 2010 at 2:39 pm
Duckie430, Riverside, Rhode Island
0 articles 0 photos 228 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The secret to life is being who you are and being happy with who you are.”
"Whatever does not kill you only makes you stronger."

they actually published this?? how is this even good poetry?