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   I borrowed

your shirt

the one you call

your favorite

the one you wanted

to wear

next Saturday.

But please,

forgive me,

I look good in green

and it really isn't

your color;

besides,

tomato stains come out

in a wash or two.




This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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Imaginedangerous This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 20, 2010 at 4:54 pm
Well, I happened to like it. It reminded me of my siblings and me... made me smile. Good job. :)
 
Duckie430 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 20, 2010 at 2:39 pm
they actually published this?? how is this even good poetry?
 
GreyEyesBlueHair replied...
May 20, 2010 at 3:54 pm

Duckie430, really? Do you have to be rude? It's published, get over it.

As for the poem. I like it up to "your color;", but I think you could have took a different turn with it. It was a dead end poem. The ending wiped out any emotions I had before the last three lines.

I'll be looking to see different works of yours though so keep writing!

 
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