At Death

Someone dies and your heart shatters...
When you cry, know I'm right there...
Waiting for a better day,
remembering our precious years.





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at*004 said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 12:17 pm
i loved it! It was really good
 
heaven said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 11:30 am
you are good but add more desciption to make us leaving and wanting to no more but over all pretty damn good!
 
scott and tyty said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 11:06 am
Life should happy so write about happy thing. I liked the description in the poem
 
Isac said...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 3:05 pm
i to have had some one in my life die this poem means a lot
 
i eat pie said...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 2:59 pm
wow this was really discrpitive and it showed how much you cared and reminds me of when my dog died
 
MIkyD992 said...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 11:51 am
It was short and sweet. I think it capture the "heart shattering pain" that comes with death.
 
OmzingTwins! said...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 11:49 am
This is an amazing poem!! I liked how it leaves us shocked!!
 
maria lover said...
Sept. 28, 2009 at 9:54 pm
this relates to me when my grandma died
 
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