you said we'd be forever.

September 11, 2009
forever's not forever
only a brief time
forever's not forever
you weren't forever mine

if forever was forever
you'd still be here
because you said forever
forever's a lie my dear

forever; a week, day, or year
your forever is my fear
forever in my mind
you'll be with me forever
i'm so glad forever is never.

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Dec. 18, 2010 at 12:01 pm
keep writing
s.nichole said...
Oct. 3, 2009 at 1:32 pm
There's something a little innocent about expectancies of forever. It's like promising disappointment. I like this:)
TaraLee said...
Oct. 3, 2009 at 1:25 pm
I agree with JaquambiaC...I believe this from my own exprience, also. However, I was the one who lied...
INnaturegirl said...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 11:05 pm
i love this poem soo much!!! it's soo true... when a guy says 4ever u can assume that it a lie!!!
JaquambiaC. said...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 7:06 pm
i really believe this fom my own experiences
kaylabaylaxo189 said...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 9:39 am
this is so good
megan19marie said...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 8:17 am
This was really good!
Brittface said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 9:33 pm
i love this poem.i'mcurrently in a relationship and we have said "forever yours" so many times.. its been three month. i know it probably wont be forever but i like to think so. my grandma was in a relationship with her high school sweetheart and it lasted forever. he died and she still loves him. thats what forever means to me.
heaven said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 11:28 am
rather inspiring, truly good, yes forever is a bit much,but there will always be a forever in mind. so i totally agree with you writng!!!:)
Rain Walker said...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 3:48 pm
Love this...... makes me think
khulse said...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 2:13 pm
like like it but u sould use more intersting words
JessLyn:] said...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 1:20 pm
We love this poem....we thought it was soo true and sincear(:
bernia said...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 11:56 am
i thought it was a good poem. i felt that nothing last forever. I think you might have said forever a little to much. but over all it was good.
pepe5769 said...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 11:51 am
I loved the emotion and voice that you put in to this poem. The idea was heartfelt and you could tell.
E and S said...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 11:48 am
I loved you poem. It is sad but is so true. I feel your pain. The peom is well worded and very enotional
rah for life said...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 11:46 am
I think you said forever way a little 2 much i know that u r trying t make a point that you thought you would bo forever but it is a little over done but i like the topic
.:elii garciia:. said...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 11:32 am
diis iis true iit haappend to me =( but ur happy wen iit dosent happen.
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