you were never there

September 20, 2009
By shakedra<3 SILVER, Carrollton, Texas
shakedra<3 SILVER, Carrollton, Texas
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thruogh the pain and all
you would never call
left me alone to fall

when i was wrong
you never came along
left me singing the same sad song

when i was drained
from all the hurt and pain
you left me even more insane
now your to blame


The author's comments:
i wrote this about a guy i thouhgt i really liked.i hope teenage girls can really relate to this on a deeper level.

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on Nov. 16 2009 at 3:52 pm
shakedra<3 SILVER, Carrollton, Texas
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i no its great rite lol..but thannk you soo much

on Nov. 2 2009 at 10:15 am
Andreeka SILVER, Carrollton, Texas
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i Really Like it Gurll:)

Yooh Can WRITE.

I Feel Your Pain.

on Oct. 8 2009 at 9:32 pm
Sunshine:D SILVER, Kenton, Ohio
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Hey. I like this, It's really good. Thanks for thee coment on my poem "This is me, i wish i knew who me was.".


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