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I wait everyday
For you to pass my way
But when you finally do
I have nothing to say.

I always check both sides
For you to grace my eyes
But when you finally do
I fall behind my guise.

Why then do I bother, everyday?
Why can't I keep this crush at bay?
Why must I live in disarray
And pray for these feelings to just go away?

Because it's love and it can't be tamed;
I'll sit here and take all the blame
For waiting and watching ‘til the end of time,
Even though you'll never be mine.




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Allyssaisahippie. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 5:51 pm:
i love it :)
 
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mimi2.0 said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 5:30 pm:
this is great. i love the flow of it. i almost got lost in it.
keep writing! =)
~mimi
 
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EdytD said...
Oct. 19, 2009 at 7:13 pm:
I think you really have the rhyming scheme going great, and that's something I could never do, so congrats! However, I think your description says it all: "yet another case... when will this end?" and in response, it won't. There are thousands of poems like this, and they are all cliched.
If you play with the phrases "you'll never be mine" and "til the end of time," you could perhaps present a different, if perhaps more literal, way of lookin... (more »)
 
riedel replied...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 3:17 pm :
I love it ...Check out my work....I think you would like it !!!
 
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