RIP dear

August 9, 2009
By , baltimore, MD
Little girl running down an alley trying to find her mom dont know why the world is so wrong, people can be so mean
some kids just wont let her be, little boy chasing her he throws a rock and it hits her in the head she drops down
he thinks shes dead he runs as blood starts to stain her clothes she was all dressed in white she was lying there behind
the church all night. Her momma cant find her, only knows everyone wants to fight her, cops are called and they search around
for all they knew she could be out of this town. Joggers find her the next morning doctors say she could have been saved
but they found her minutes to late to much blood lose thats how she died, they said they tried no one knows where the little boy
went, until today when he showed up at her grave

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Amanda P. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 2:27 pm
that's deep. . . very deep. . .
sorry for your loss. great poem by the way. . . a few grammatical errors toward the end, but overall, very good.
emily.a said...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 2:08 am
i'm sorry for the loss of your friend...
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