Teen Years MAG

By Unknown, Unknown, Unknown

   Burning cycles of confusion

Suspended motions of hypnosis

Masked flirtations

Raw blood

Black lights

Naked bones

Retrieved fossils

Teddy Bear warmth

Snakeskin icy cold

Misty dreams

Yielded ambitions

Dazzling, wondrous illusions

New aged art forms

Daring outbreaks

Green polka-dotted lipstick

Created harmonies

Yelling whispers

Absorbent chemical reactions

Hungry crocodiles

Reaching tree-limbs

Indirect courses

Intersecting paths

Broken compasses

The endurance of adolescence

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This article has 7 comments.

on May. 18 2010 at 9:43 pm
decadentsanctuaries, C, Delaware
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Super creative. Very nice job with this one. :)

on May. 18 2010 at 6:26 pm
Mary_O333 PLATINUM, Ledyard, Connecticut
22 articles 6 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
What you wish to see in the world, be the change!

this is very descriptive, it describes it perfectlly....good work...keep writting

on May. 18 2010 at 5:19 pm
iknowyourheart BRONZE, Casper, Wyoming
1 article 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And I'll borrow words from all my favorite paragraphs to write a ballad while we say the things we hope would mean the most to me and each letter sent I've found in the pages of hope for the days when I feel like I've lost everything."-mayday parade

i like it very much :)

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on May. 18 2010 at 3:19 pm
Eilatan GOLD, Old Greenwich, Connecticut
11 articles 1 photo 307 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nobody is normal. Everybody in the world is a weirdo freak. Except you, which makes you a weirdo freak."

this is amazing! it captures the feeling so well, this is vunderful work.

on May. 18 2010 at 12:49 pm
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

This is really awesome!

on May. 18 2010 at 10:58 am
AndThisIsReal PLATINUM, Broadalbin, New York
31 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dans chaque fil il y a un debut.

Your use of language is wonderful. I like the raw honesty of this poem, its abstract and in its own way beautiful.

on May. 18 2010 at 12:16 am
CrazySquid GOLD, Cashmere, Washington
12 articles 2 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"For beauty is nothing but the begining of terror"

Rilke part of 'The Tenth Elgy'

wow awesome. its chaotic but it makes so much sense.


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