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By Anonymous

   I giggled

out loud.

When you walked by me.

And you.

t

w

i

s

t

e

d

me back

hard against the tree.



(Nails so clean like razors,

Why should you not be king?)



And now the soft earth ...

spins,

crumbling beneath my feet.

over the devils. landing,

at my side.



So sing to them, Ghost.

They always loved you ...

your voice.



anyway.

I will be here when you come home again.



Perhaps

This time you will

be giggling at me.



Or.

perhaps only my shadow will remain ...

standing,

Lightly ...

waving

and whispering.



Even more so ...

Touching.

Hard.

Against.

The.

Tree.





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amaranth178 said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 12:00 pm
amaranth178, Washington, District Of Columbia
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wow, this is really creative! I like the way the words were placed/spaced out and the words leave much to the reader's interpretation...I think it can be taken at least two ways (I don't feel like overanalyzing it just now; sorry)

The pace is good and the message is kind of...open. I like.

Good job.