The Love That Once Laid Within MAG

By Unknown, Unknown, Unknown

   I Loved yet I Died within

I Cried yet I Laughed out loud

I Hid all my thoughts within,

yet my Friends tried to get them out.

I said NO I don't want to tell you,

yet they Never seemed to give up.

I Tried and Tried to be Happy while

Dying deep within,

But there was just One person

who will not give in.

Asking, Asking is all He does

till He gets the truth that lies

Deep within my Soul.

There He is always Listening,

yet I try to Run away in my mind

He seems to get my Heart to Open up.

My Heart says let go of your pain


So I Speak and Cry and He is always there


Listening is all He does while I talk.

He Loves and Learns and Cares throughout the


Sharing advice is what He is great at.

His Smile and Eyes show great warmth.

His Hugs and Kisses shows the love He has for


So I Speak and Trust in him all the days of my


The Love that was Once kept within is now

Shown forth through our Undying love for

each other.

Throughout the years to come our Love will


Greater, and Our hearts will bind as


Forever till death do us part, He will be in my


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on Jan. 31 2012 at 12:24 pm
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Is there a reason behind your capitalization? Was there some driving symbolism like Emily Dickinson?

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on Jan. 31 2012 at 11:11 am
dya.o PLATINUM, Milton, Florida
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Oh my this is soo beautiful! I envy your talent:D

on Jun. 6 2010 at 7:23 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
"we are captives of our own identities, living in prisons of our own creation"

Omg ihts like the poem spioe too me, please keep writing!

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on Dec. 29 2008 at 3:41 am
to be honest, i cried when i read your poem. it brings back so many memories. it is simply beautiful. keep writing.


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