The Forest This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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   The forest,

Dark and dense

The canopy up above,

Holds back the light

The dark browns and greens of the trees,

Cast shadows on the ground

It is dark,

But not frightening

This is Life!




This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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MusicInMyHeart<3 said...
Feb. 5, 2010 at 5:48 pm
This is good. Very simple and maybe it could use some more descriptions of the darkness and the density to help it out a little but if you like it then leave it because it's great as is too. And very true.
 
kittkatbar0676 said...
Feb. 5, 2010 at 1:27 pm
while thoughtful, i feel that this could have used some more work... more descriptions, to make this a little more artistic, to create an image in one's mind. nice subject, though! :)
 
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