The Color of Fear

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Fear

Is bluish gray
Like darkness creeping up behind me
There is suspense
Something will happen at any moment
I feel weak
As if I’m tied up and can’t escape
I want to hide
To break the silence
And scream





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The~crayon~in~my~heart said...
Jan. 8, 2010 at 5:19 pm
Im running out of words to describe your writing
 
arElana replied...
Jan. 11, 2010 at 8:42 pm
Thank you.
 
Saysh said...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 12:53 pm
Awesome! I loved it!!!!!!
 
LaylaViolet said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 9:47 am
OOOHHH! I totally loved it. I'm not really into poetry--a lot anyway. I'll read it and everything, and it takes me a while to get it. I liked this one in particular; I'll make it my last favorite in my 'Favorite Articles thingie'.
Check out my stuff too. :P
 
ajibike This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 21, 2009 at 7:01 pm
Really interesting. I liked this poem a lot. It's quite different and that's what made it so intriguing. Good job.
 
RaquelL said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 3:22 pm
this is really an incredible poem and i remeber it from 5th grade lol! I would tell my friends but they dont have an account!!!!!!!!! i read all ur work and its amazing the miram article actually made me cry and I showed ur writing to my family!
 
CrazyClimber replied...
Oct. 1, 2009 at 7:08 pm
thanks. i remember when we rewrote the poem too.
fear is hot pink
like me cuz im awesome that way...
lol good times
check out my new article. its called Killer. i have over 100 veiws and all my comments say its amazing
 
arElana replied...
Jan. 6, 2010 at 3:34 pm
omg! Killer has over 450 views and 14 comments and 17 ratings and everyone loves it! PLEASE look and tell me what you think
 
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