What Will Happen to America

September 7, 2009
By qtepa2ti PLATINUM, Broomfield, Colorado
qtepa2ti PLATINUM, Broomfield, Colorado
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CHAINED in a corner
like a beast on a leash,
a girl scared and frightened
like a fish on a beach.
As the dim WHITE light flickers
BLUE eyes shine in fear.
Hopeless and pleading,
filling with tears.
Her RED velvet dress
is spotted with stains.
Each has a memory
filled with struggles and pain.
Like when she fought for her FREEDOM
but failed and got smacked.
Now she's alone and so frightened
as the basement goes BLACK.


The author's comments:
I used a lot of symbolism in this poem. It is what I believe is going to happen to the USA and what is currently happening with some of Obama’s choices and ideas

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on Oct. 11 2009 at 2:22 pm
Ashlynrae BRONZE, Abilene, Texas
2 articles 8 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I didn't know I was making history,
I was just tired of giving in."
--- Rosa Parks

Great work! Bolding some words added good emphasis. I would love your feedback on my pieces!




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