Our World

August 25, 2009
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Trillions of years alive
Finally starting to age.
Has been home to humans and animals
But slowly starting to be destroyed.
The humans are careless,
The animals suffer,
Unaware of why things change.
But humans know what’s
happening and why.
Yet,to reverse the problem we'd have to go back in time.
As we try to help our planet,
we hurt it even more.
Even though the ideas are great,
being mass- produced creates a bigger hole
The really good inventions,
Electric cars; solar panels,
too expensive for the poor.
All of these problems,
getting bigger day by day.
But if we work together,
Try to change the causes, our ways
Who knows what would happen
Trillions of years from today.

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sspnb said...
Sept. 12, 2009 at 8:38 pm
wat a great peom rstar24 :)
everything there is tru
Rstar24 replied...
Sept. 13, 2009 at 1:00 pm
Thank you so much. I hope it gets published so I can share this poem with more people.
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