Losing you

September 1, 2009
By BarrelRacer GOLD, Huber Heights, Ohio
BarrelRacer GOLD, Huber Heights, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Bring The Challenge or Eat My Dust.


Your memories lingers,
And your touch never leaves.
The pain is killing me,
Its getting so hard to breath.
The sting is unbearable,
It burns even more.
Pushing and crushing,
I’m pinned to the floor.
I Miss you so much,
Don’t know what to do.
It’s getting so dark.
And I don’t want to lose you.
I said it once,
And I’ll say it again.
I love you so much,
In till the end.


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on Sep. 9 2009 at 5:44 pm
BarrelRacer GOLD, Huber Heights, Ohio
10 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Bring The Challenge or Eat My Dust.

i know what you mean. thank you

on Sep. 7 2009 at 10:59 am
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

I sorry to hear that. I lost someone that was like a dad to me. He died last year and I still miss him but you put the pian into words so beautifully. Thank yo for writing this.

on Sep. 7 2009 at 10:52 am
BarrelRacer GOLD, Huber Heights, Ohio
10 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Bring The Challenge or Eat My Dust.

I made this when i heard my Great Uncle Davy died. i loved him so much, and the pain of loseing him hurt me so much.

on Sep. 7 2009 at 7:45 am
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
61 articles 36 photos 216 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

Wow. This is awesome. May I ask if you where writing it about bf/gf or some one died. I can relate to both and this poem is awesome :-)


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