Losing you

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Your memories lingers,
And your touch never leaves.
The pain is killing me,
Its getting so hard to breath.
The sting is unbearable,
It burns even more.
Pushing and crushing,
I’m pinned to the floor.
I Miss you so much,
Don’t know what to do.
It’s getting so dark.
And I don’t want to lose you.
I said it once,
And I’ll say it again.
I love you so much,
In till the end.





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SarahZ said...
Sept. 7, 2009 at 7:45 am
Wow. This is awesome. May I ask if you where writing it about bf/gf or some one died. I can relate to both and this poem is awesome :-)
 
Jessica M. replied...
Sept. 7, 2009 at 10:52 am
I made this when i heard my Great Uncle Davy died. i loved him so much, and the pain of loseing him hurt me so much.
 
SarahZ replied...
Sept. 7, 2009 at 10:59 am
I sorry to hear that. I lost someone that was like a dad to me. He died last year and I still miss him but you put the pian into words so beautifully. Thank yo for writing this.
 
Jessica M. replied...
Sept. 9, 2009 at 5:44 pm
i know what you mean. thank you
 
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