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Eyes Like a Dream

Look into her gray eyes,
you'll see the clouds.
The dream of the purest of clouds and bluest of skies.
They'll capture your beating heart,
like a cage has encased it.
Your body will never move,
and the world will feel like your standing on a solid stone...
Your eyes will be lost,
and the color will dissipate,
all lost,
like a dream.



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Jaquie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 6, 2009 at 6:59 pm:
I really love how you describe your poetry in your description. It shows a drive that most are either lacking or too shy to admit. Nice work.
God bless,
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Sahar T. said...
Sept. 6, 2009 at 4:08 pm:
wow that amazing
 
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Hope_PrincessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 4, 2009 at 7:54 pm:
So cool, and I'm totally lovin' it.
Great job, and I'm glad you're still "kicking". lol-Fantastic!
 
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