No One Is There

Silence…
Silence…
High-pitches in my ears
Thorns stabbing in the back of my eyes
Pushing out blood and tears
Vanished…
Never to appear again…
The person is gone
Nothing can be done
What to do with all this bleeding and tearing?
Except feeling more lost and torn apart because no one is listening
Drips of pain in form of blood
Drips of sorrow in form of tears
Staining the white tiles
With saltiness and fresh blood
Time is washing the stains away
Taking years and years to do so
When the pain inside has left a burnt hole
With fire sparks of anger and remembrance





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Jordan S. said...
Sept. 5, 2009 at 11:02 pm
Mite I ask who you're afraid of losing?
 
Andromeda Gal-axy replied...
Sept. 5, 2009 at 11:52 pm
Hello! Jordan
Thank you for your question.
This poem I had created is a reminder to all audience to cherish the individuals that they admire as if there is not another day.
In my case this poem is refering to my best friend. The woman who brought me into this world. =]
 
Amber S. said...
Sept. 5, 2009 at 4:39 pm
This is an amazing poem, and I can completely relate to it. The way you described everything was great, keep up the good work, and I can't wait to hear more from you.
 
choirchic said...
Sept. 3, 2009 at 10:50 pm
wow that was a very powerful poem. i love the way it was written. you portrayed death so well it sounded like you had gone through it yourself. keep on writing you will touch someone with your writings
 
Lily B. said...
Sept. 3, 2009 at 5:28 pm
This is SO accurate! I can honestly say, I have been at this point. I think it shows real talent to be able to portray emotion you have never felt so perfectly. Thank you. I really hope you keep writing and never have to experience this pain for real. I would love to read more! <3
 
writtendesires said...
Sept. 3, 2009 at 5:10 pm
Wow this is very good. it portrays death and agony very well. you are a great poem writer. can't wait to read more.
 
mgraves This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 5, 2009 at 4:15 am
Wow, this was awesome! I can really relate to this. Kudos!
 
cheer4life replied...
Sept. 5, 2009 at 12:37 pm
wow. vvery powerfull. thts useually how i feel when my boyfriend uses me to show off. i hink im gonna break up. THNX SOOOO MUCH!!!
 
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