No One Is There

August 27, 2009
By Red-River-Delta GOLD, Bellevue, Washington
Red-River-Delta GOLD, Bellevue, Washington
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Silence…
Silence…
High-pitches in my ears
Thorns stabbing in the back of my eyes
Pushing out blood and tears
Vanished…
Never to appear again…
The person is gone
Nothing can be done
What to do with all this bleeding and tearing?
Except feeling more lost and torn apart because no one is listening
Drips of pain in form of blood
Drips of sorrow in form of tears
Staining the white tiles
With saltiness and fresh blood
Time is washing the stains away
Taking years and years to do so
When the pain inside has left a burnt hole
With fire sparks of anger and remembrance


The author's comments:
I have imagined in my day dreams and thoughts before sleeping of losing someone dear. The images delivered through this poem will not occur in real life, but it portrays the agony of not having that person near ever...again.

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on Sep. 5 2009 at 11:52 pm
Hello! Jordan

Thank you for your question.

This poem I had created is a reminder to all audience to cherish the individuals that they admire as if there is not another day.

In my case this poem is refering to my best friend. The woman who brought me into this world. =]

on Sep. 5 2009 at 11:02 pm
Jordan Stucky, Avondale, Arizona
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Mite I ask who you're afraid of losing?

xoambsbaby said...
on Sep. 5 2009 at 4:39 pm
xoambsbaby, Penfield, New York
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This is an amazing poem, and I can completely relate to it. The way you described everything was great, keep up the good work, and I can't wait to hear more from you.

cheer4life said...
on Sep. 5 2009 at 12:37 pm
wow. vvery powerfull. thts useually how i feel when my boyfriend uses me to show off. i hink im gonna break up. THNX SOOOO MUCH!!!

mgraves GOLD said...
on Sep. 5 2009 at 4:15 am
mgraves GOLD, St. Louis, Missouri
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Wow, this was awesome! I can really relate to this. Kudos!

choirchic said...
on Sep. 3 2009 at 10:50 pm
wow that was a very powerful poem. i love the way it was written. you portrayed death so well it sounded like you had gone through it yourself. keep on writing you will touch someone with your writings

on Sep. 3 2009 at 5:28 pm
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
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This is SO accurate! I can honestly say, I have been at this point. I think it shows real talent to be able to portray emotion you have never felt so perfectly. Thank you. I really hope you keep writing and never have to experience this pain for real. I would love to read more! <3

on Sep. 3 2009 at 5:10 pm
Lifesbutadream BRONZE, Hesperia, California
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Wow this is very good. it portrays death and agony very well. you are a great poem writer. can't wait to read more.


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