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Im sad
I dont know what to do
Im so confused
I wish I didnt regret the first day I met you
You are probably not aware of the confusion you cauuse
I hate you
No I dont
Im trying
Its not working
Can someone better than you, distract me please
I dont want to feel this pull in my stomach
These butterflies are fluttering
They are eating away at my hatred
I try to kill them
Pull them out
Tear them apart
Cut off their wings
Ill kill them
As your killing me
All is fair in this battlefield
Love and war
Love and hate
Love and lost
Losing you would be like losing a part of myself
But losing myself is worth losing you
Goodbyes are in order here
Hellos are for when you finally disappear
From within me
The butterflies stopped fluttering
Your gone
Finally



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LastChapter said...
Feb. 1, 2011 at 5:18 pm
so many favorite lines i can't mention them all--i'd basically be repeating this whole poem. definitely my favorite of yours.
 
Powd3er said...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 11:07 am
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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LavenderStone said...
Nov. 27, 2009 at 9:11 pm
I love the butterfly analogy and just the overall tone and meaning of the poem.
 
annkaykay2011 said...
Sept. 6, 2009 at 10:54 pm
Beautifully sad & deep. I can relate really well to it to it. The style and the wording were great. I loved it! P.S. I'm one of those many girls with her heart on her sleeve too.<3 Let's stay strong =]
 
Muntaha J. said...
Sept. 6, 2009 at 4:39 pm
I can so relate to this poem. Lovely work. Keep writing. ^^
 
Jaquie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 6, 2009 at 2:33 pm
Wow, this is really great. I can totally relate!
Keep writing.
God bless,
...,
 
shortchick4141 said...
Sept. 6, 2009 at 10:00 am
i can relate to this big time when my boyfriend broke up with me you really are an amazing person and its funny because i thought i was like the only one that could get there heart broking well im not btu thank you
 
choirchic said...
Sept. 3, 2009 at 10:56 pm
WOW I CAN REALLY RELATE FROM WHEN MY BOYFRIEND BROKE UP WITH ME. i still have those butterflies that you talk about. i think every girl no matter if they had their heart broken or not can relate to the poem
 
Lily B. said...
Sept. 3, 2009 at 8:53 pm
This is fantastic! I toally see where you're soming from and you seem like someone I could really realte to. i hope you don't mind, I'm sending the link to this to a couple of my friends who I think would really appreciate the beauty in this piece. As long as you keep writing, I'll keep reading and commenting. <3
 
writtendesires said...
Sept. 3, 2009 at 5:14 pm
How amazing that you can write something that a lot of girls can relate to. It is beautiful to feel understood and it is just as beautiful to know someone else has felt the exact same way. your poem was able to do just that. this was very good. Kudos.
 
MorningStar15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 2, 2009 at 8:01 pm
I CAN RELATE SO MUCH! i just emailed my (MAYBE SOON TO BE EX) boyfriend and told him to make up his mind and wow this poem is how i am feeling right now.
 
tay1234 said...
Sept. 2, 2009 at 7:22 pm
wow i can totally relate to this. really really good
 
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