Dear Oblivion

August 27, 2009
By iPonder GOLD, Elk Grove, California
iPonder GOLD, Elk Grove, California
14 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
The bad things happen first,then the good things, then more bad things, then more good things: God helps us through the bad things so we can enjoy the good ones. :)


Im sad
I dont know what to do
Im so confused
I wish I didnt regret the first day I met you
You are probably not aware of the confusion you cauuse
I hate you
No I dont
Im trying
Its not working
Can someone better than you, distract me please
I dont want to feel this pull in my stomach
These butterflies are fluttering
They are eating away at my hatred
I try to kill them
Pull them out
Tear them apart
Cut off their wings
Ill kill them
As your killing me
All is fair in this battlefield
Love and war
Love and hate
Love and lost
Losing you would be like losing a part of myself
But losing myself is worth losing you
Goodbyes are in order here
Hellos are for when you finally disappear
From within me
The butterflies stopped fluttering
Your gone
Finally


The author's comments:
. I enjoy listening to deep and loud hard rock and love techno and alternative. Speaking as one of MANY girls who wear their hearts on their sleeves, I try to channel my feelings for a person in words, which turns into poems.

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LastChapter said...
on Feb. 1 2011 at 5:18 pm
LastChapter, Hempstead, New York
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Favorite Quote:
(couldn't think of anything better at the time) "Take the first step in faith. You don't have to see the whole staircase, just take the first step."-Dr.Martin Luther King Jr.

so many favorite lines i can't mention them all--i'd basically be repeating this whole poem. definitely my favorite of yours.

on Feb. 23 2010 at 11:07 am
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan agter you meet my familyXx

on Nov. 27 2009 at 9:11 pm
LavenderStone BRONZE, Athens, Georgia
4 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's never too late—in fiction or in life—to revise." -Nancy Thayer

I love the butterfly analogy and just the overall tone and meaning of the poem.

on Sep. 6 2009 at 10:54 pm
annkaykay2011 DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
75 articles 11 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am who I am, sorry, no changes."

Beautifully sad & deep. I can relate really well to it to it. The style and the wording were great. I loved it! P.S. I'm one of those many girls with her heart on her sleeve too.<3 Let's stay strong =]

Cow94 GOLD said...
on Sep. 6 2009 at 4:39 pm
Cow94 GOLD, Salmiya, Other
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I can so relate to this poem. Lovely work. Keep writing. ^^

Jaquie BRONZE said...
on Sep. 6 2009 at 2:33 pm
Jaquie BRONZE, West Palm Beach, Florida
3 articles 0 photos 407 comments

Favorite Quote:
This is certainly one of my favorites: "I will become even more undignified than this, and I will be humiliated in my own eyes." -2 Samuel 6:22

Wow, this is really great. I can totally relate!

Keep writing.

God bless,

...,

on Sep. 6 2009 at 10:00 am
i can relate to this big time when my boyfriend broke up with me you really are an amazing person and its funny because i thought i was like the only one that could get there heart broking well im not btu thank you

choirchic said...
on Sep. 3 2009 at 10:56 pm
WOW I CAN REALLY RELATE FROM WHEN MY BOYFRIEND BROKE UP WITH ME. i still have those butterflies that you talk about. i think every girl no matter if they had their heart broken or not can relate to the poem

on Sep. 3 2009 at 8:53 pm
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
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This is fantastic! I toally see where you're soming from and you seem like someone I could really realte to. i hope you don't mind, I'm sending the link to this to a couple of my friends who I think would really appreciate the beauty in this piece. As long as you keep writing, I'll keep reading and commenting. <3

on Sep. 3 2009 at 5:14 pm
Lifesbutadream BRONZE, Hesperia, California
4 articles 2 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Change is just a new begining

How amazing that you can write something that a lot of girls can relate to. It is beautiful to feel understood and it is just as beautiful to know someone else has felt the exact same way. your poem was able to do just that. this was very good. Kudos.

on Sep. 2 2009 at 8:01 pm
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
71 articles 2 photos 180 comments
I CAN RELATE SO MUCH! i just emailed my (MAYBE SOON TO BE EX) boyfriend and told him to make up his mind and wow this poem is how i am feeling right now.

tay1234 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 2 2009 at 7:22 pm
tay1234 BRONZE, Ft. Lauderdale, Florida
1 article 0 photos 2 comments
wow i can totally relate to this. really really good


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