August 27, 2009
By XRamirez SILVER, Round Rock, Texas
XRamirez SILVER, Round Rock, Texas
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Connections broke
As my mind begins to smoke.
Corruption taints my conscience
Morals lose their hold
As sin begins to take control.

Conniving I have become
Seeking some type of fake love
Just to be empowered is what I crave
The feeling is like a drug
It makes me crazed.

Condescending aura
No one deserves my respect
I only use to delve out neglect
In my body resides a void
My spirit gone long ago destroyed.

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on Sep. 17 2009 at 5:01 pm
XRamirez SILVER, Round Rock, Texas
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I definitely appreciate all the feedback definitely keeps the motivation and inspiration flowing! :D

on Sep. 6 2009 at 4:48 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

This is very good. and deep. Keep up the good work.

on Sep. 6 2009 at 3:01 pm
Are you Christian? Cuz i can totally relate to this feeling, things corruptng your faith. God Bless. Ur not alone.

on Sep. 3 2009 at 6:26 pm
SagaLiSela PLATINUM, Boonsboro, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"I love you."

Simple as that.

Or not that simple.

Sweetness. The emotion and thought you put in your poetry is really amazing. Keep writing!

on Sep. 3 2009 at 5:24 pm
Ms.Understood, Laramie, Wyoming
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i agree that this is very powerful. the words give me a visual on the feelings you feel. AWESOME!

on Sep. 3 2009 at 5:22 pm
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
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Wow. Just wow. That made me cry, it's really intense. I hope you keep writing. <3

on Sep. 3 2009 at 5:15 pm
Lifesbutadream BRONZE, Hesperia, California
4 articles 2 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Change is just a new begining

I agree this was powerful, strong emotion. it is something id definatly like to read again. this is really great.

mgraves GOLD said...
on Sep. 3 2009 at 3:26 pm
mgraves GOLD, St. Louis, Missouri
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Nice!! Really powerful stuff! :)

on Sep. 3 2009 at 10:14 am
keyboard_musican SILVER, Springfield, Illinois
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wow that had so much feeling. its really good


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