Hopeless

August 27, 2009
By BlondieIsBlonde GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
BlondieIsBlonde GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is what you make it"


Lost and hopeless

Silent with nothing to say

Wishing just for once

Someone would stay

Nothing ever changes

Every things always the same

Never good enough

Living a life of shame

Comes and goes

This is the way things are

Pain and loss

Slowly starting to scare

Confused and broken

So easy to replace

Lonely and messed up

In this place



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on Sep. 7 2009 at 1:17 am
BlondieIsBlonde GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is what you make it"

Thanks so much for the feedback!

Loveall BRONZE said...
on Sep. 6 2009 at 3:54 pm
Loveall BRONZE, Kansa, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
The Raven "Nevermore" By E.A. Poe

that deep and so true

on Sep. 6 2009 at 2:23 pm
ZebraWithoutStripes ELITE, Blue Springs, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
To make a difference in the world, you have to be different from the world.

omgsh. i love all your work, this one especially. this poem is so honest, it's great!

Deadjokr said...
on Sep. 3 2009 at 7:29 pm
Deadjokr, Childress, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never go to bed mad. Stay up and fight." Phyllis Diller

Great poem!

on Sep. 3 2009 at 5:52 pm
Ms.Understood, Laramie, Wyoming
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This poem has such a good ring to it i read it 10 times! AWESOME!




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