Further Away

August 27, 2009
By BlondieIsBlonde GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
BlondieIsBlonde GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is what you make it"


Love Measured to no degree

Whats so wrong, hard to see

So much easier just to flee

I miss the way we used to be

So loving, innocent, and carefree

Cant live by what would be

Close the lock, throw away the key

Inside and out screaming to be free

Running further and further away from me



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Jaquie BRONZE said...
on Sep. 6 2009 at 7:02 pm
Jaquie BRONZE, West Palm Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
This is certainly one of my favorites: "I will become even more undignified than this, and I will be humiliated in my own eyes." -2 Samuel 6:22

I can't tell you how much I enjoyed the flow of the poem. The despair, the regret, the climax, the hint of triumph, and then the sad ending... It really is brilliant.

God bless,

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on Sep. 6 2009 at 2:25 pm
ZebraWithoutStripes ELITE, Blue Springs, Missouri
102 articles 8 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
To make a difference in the world, you have to be different from the world.

this is so sad but beautiful




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