Faded

August 26, 2009
By SickImage SILVER, Klamath Falls, Oregon
SickImage SILVER, Klamath Falls, Oregon
9 articles 1 photo 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
The room was very quiet. I walked over to the TV set and turned it onto a dead channel-white noise at maximum decibels, a fine sound for sleeping, a powerful continuous hiss to drown out everything strange."


I got sick of
Sub woofers
Blasting stereo and thumping base
Car engines and bike parts
Smoke in my face

Now 2 months in to this new relationship and im sick of
Talking
Sweet motions like opening the car door for me
Quiet voice and gentle touch
Smoke blown past me

I miss
Hair grabs to get in my face
Pin downs and yelling
Name calling and corner mouth kisses
Smoke in my face

What am I supposed to do?
I love you and I hate what you do
I hate how you are and you don’t listen
He cares to much and gives me to much space
Im never gonna be happy
But at least when I was with you, we were unhappy together


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on Mar. 30 2012 at 1:33 am
TaoTwins SILVER, Seattle, Indiana
5 articles 2 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am the wisest man alive, because I know one thing, and that one thing is that I know nothing~Socrates

This piece is amazing! I love how flawless it flows.

I love "at least when I was with you, we were unhappy together." It sums up perfectly.


on Jun. 11 2011 at 6:15 pm
TheaterJunkie GOLD, Windham, Maine
13 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon and even if you miss, you'll land among the stars.

I really like this a lot!

 


Sarbear GOLD said...
on Mar. 30 2010 at 6:36 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
10 articles 4 photos 489 comments

Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

this is really good! im sure everyone can relate to this at some time in their lives great job :-)

on Sep. 18 2009 at 7:31 am
annkaykay2011 DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
75 articles 11 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am who I am, sorry, no changes."

I can relate completely to that...Its deep and the style is great. Bon Heur! =]


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