August 26, 2009
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I got sick of
Sub woofers
Blasting stereo and thumping base
Car engines and bike parts
Smoke in my face

Now 2 months in to this new relationship and im sick of
Sweet motions like opening the car door for me
Quiet voice and gentle touch
Smoke blown past me

I miss
Hair grabs to get in my face
Pin downs and yelling
Name calling and corner mouth kisses
Smoke in my face

What am I supposed to do?
I love you and I hate what you do
I hate how you are and you don’t listen
He cares to much and gives me to much space
Im never gonna be happy
But at least when I was with you, we were unhappy together

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TaoTwins said...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 1:33 am

This piece is amazing! I love how flawless it flows.

I love "at least when I was with you, we were unhappy together." It sums up perfectly.

TheaterJunkie said...
Jun. 11, 2011 at 6:15 pm

I really like this a lot!


annkaykay2011 said...
Sept. 18, 2009 at 7:31 am
I can relate completely to that...Its deep and the style is great. Bon Heur! =]
Sarbear This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 6:36 pm
this is really good! im sure everyone can relate to this at some time in their lives great job :-)
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