Come Comet

Come my comet,
Light up my night sky.
Fill my heart with beauty,
For the few seconds you stick around.
Dont leave my comet,
Stay and make my night majestic.
For if you disappear,
It will remind me of him.





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Schubster said...
Sept. 4, 2009 at 10:52 pm
awesome poem!!! :)
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MyChey5 replied...
Sept. 4, 2009 at 11:39 pm
i did read yours and i highly recommend everyone to read under a lemon tree!!!!
 
Schubster replied...
Sept. 5, 2009 at 2:50 pm
haha thank you so much! that means a lot to me! by the way, i love NY too
 
LittleBritt said...
Sept. 4, 2009 at 2:48 pm
awesome! cute :)
 
Jennifer B. replied...
Sept. 4, 2009 at 8:59 pm
Great poem !
 
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