i wish i had a brain

August 29, 2009
the blood drips,
like the love from our lips,
i love you more with every kiss,
can i help you miss,

you are still here,
is there something you fear,
because i fear losing you,
life is a story i never knew,

but now that you are here,
i need the blade no more,
as it would cut,
and tame my pain,

but with you in my arms,
i now have a brain.

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dragonfan said...
Oct. 19, 2009 at 3:51 pm
Wow! this is really good!
relaxingcry replied...
Nov. 13, 2009 at 10:34 am
please veiw the rest of my work ill return the favor
dragonfan replied...
Nov. 13, 2009 at 2:07 pm
ok :) ill check it out
LilaLeon said...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 4:51 pm
really good. :).
relaxingcry replied...
Oct. 15, 2009 at 12:52 pm
thank you my next two should be better but they are still waiting to be aproved
heart_peaches! replied...
Nov. 13, 2009 at 6:02 pm
It's really great! 'cept it's kinda weird 'cuz u sound like my sister. Oh well, the poem is still awesome!
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