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smile:)

By , dublin, Ireland
She closes her eyes
burying her pain inside
impossible as it seemed
she simply had to try

she was right
they bearly recognized her this time
they didnt see behind the lie of her smile





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dreamer_believer said...
Sept. 1, 2009 at 7:17 pm
omigoodness! wow. soo short, but the meaning is soo deep! i absolutely love it :) great job! keep writing, it's very good. also check out some of my work and comment. but honeslty...wow...this took my breath away!
 
cutietothemax58 said...
Aug. 29, 2009 at 3:40 am
Your poem is very deep and it says a lot. Though it is short, it says more than what is merely read. It truly struck a chord with me. I know that I hide a lot of things behind a smile. A lot.
 
SarahZ said...
Aug. 29, 2009 at 12:39 am
awesome. soo true....keep writing! :)
 
<3::wish4wings::<3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 27, 2009 at 11:09 pm
this is short..but its still good. it has alot of meaning. i liked it:D
 
xXsmileXx This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 27, 2009 at 10:58 pm
No one ever does.....do they? My smile is the best camoflouge i have.
 
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