smile:)

August 15, 2009
By Anonymous

She closes her eyes
burying her pain inside
impossible as it seemed
she simply had to try

she was right
they bearly recognized her this time
they didnt see behind the lie of her smile



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on Sep. 1 2009 at 7:17 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

omigoodness! wow. soo short, but the meaning is soo deep! i absolutely love it :) great job! keep writing, it's very good. also check out some of my work and comment. but honeslty...wow...this took my breath away!

on Aug. 29 2009 at 3:40 am
cutietothemax58 SILVER, Scottdale, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Don't tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass. ~Anton Chekhov


There's nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein. ~Walter Wellesley "Red" Smith

Your poem is very deep and it says a lot. Though it is short, it says more than what is merely read. It truly struck a chord with me. I know that I hide a lot of things behind a smile. A lot.

on Aug. 29 2009 at 12:39 am
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

awesome. soo true....keep writing! :)

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on Aug. 27 2009 at 11:09 pm
E.Lee GOLD, Akron, Ohio
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this is short..but its still good. it has alot of meaning. i liked it:D

on Aug. 27 2009 at 10:58 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

No one ever does.....do they? My smile is the best camoflouge i have.


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