One Tear

August 21, 2009
By angela hurst SILVER, Aurora, Colorado
angela hurst SILVER, Aurora, Colorado
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A love of my own,
Is that possible?
A man to stand by my side,
Is that what I realy want?
A chance to realy live life,
Is it going to come?
A woman just wants to be heard,
Is someone going to hear her?
A change in fath,
Is it going to help?
A life time of pain and strugle,
Is it ever going to end?

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on Sep. 1 2009 at 7:24 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

i like the form of you stating a problem, or a desire, then asking a question. it's very rare, and it's a great poem! i love the content, it's so sweet and so true. awesome job writing this one :) i love it! check out some of my work and comment, i love the opinions! :)

on Aug. 29 2009 at 3:41 pm
unearthlyhaphazard GOLD, N/A, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"There are three rules for writing the novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are."~W. Somerset Maugham

I like how this poem questions life. Good job.

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