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Here I sit by the window,
watching,
waiting,
I don't know what for.
Maybe,
if I sit here long enough,
my prince will come walzing by.
His armor will shine in the sunlight,
my smile grows wider,
and he'll stop by this window,
my window,
he'll take off his helmet,
his mask of disguise,
gaze straight through my eyes,
to my heart,
through the dusty, old glass.
Smiling, he'll pull up a rose,
its red beauty calling my name.
For the longest time,
we just stare at each other,
not moving an inch,
After one more second of looking my direction,
he places the rose on the ground,
turns,
and walks away,
never to be seen again.
Maybe next time,
I should open the window.




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kirbybug said...
May 19, 2010 at 2:41 pm:

wow love it greatly put together!!! oh and i LOVED the end!!!!!

under kirby~bug would u look at my work?? i have one published now and on the site but nones commented!!!:( and if you keep checkin in maybe my others will come out to.

anyways great job God certainly gave you talent

 
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CarlyG said...
May 19, 2010 at 2:39 pm:
Very nice! I really like the idea that you threw into this poem. Also, the format was very creative.
 
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wiltedrose said...
Aug. 31, 2009 at 3:30 pm:
hahaha LOVE the ending! so great :D
 
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kiwi12 said...
Aug. 26, 2009 at 1:08 am:
OHHHH this is so awesome. I want to say AMAZING but Inkspired took my word out of my mouth, or keyboard. Whatever.
SO GOOD!
 
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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 25, 2009 at 6:58 pm:
cute!! i loved this the minute i started reading it becasue you pulled me in. each sentence got better and better :) so sweet, and the ending is very good :) great poem! check out and comment/rate some of my work, i love the feedback. oh and this one is 4 stars :)
 
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Inkspired said...
Aug. 25, 2009 at 3:58 pm:
AMAZING! I love this poem so much! The ending is funny and deep at the same time! Beautiful!
 
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