Trying to Write

August 18, 2009
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As I prepare to express my thoughts,
I sharpen
my pencil.
Placing it onto the page,
I begin to write.
My pencil breaks.
I begin to sharpen again,
in a plug-in sharpener.
I seem to have blown a fuse.
Carefully, I begin to take out the plug,
and I try not to get...

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NascentNovelist This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 28, 2009 at 1:12 am
I very much enjoyed all of the sound effects! It puts me into the moment and makes me smile!
Tears2Roses said...
Aug. 28, 2009 at 1:07 am
That was funny know the feeling thats happend to me so meny times that i use macanical penciles!!!
kiwi12 said...
Aug. 26, 2009 at 1:09 am
BAHAHAHAHA Love it, describes my life. D'OH!!!
Inkspired said...
Aug. 25, 2009 at 3:56 pm
Love this, it's hilarious. Reminds me of a poem I had to write where you use sounds to express yourself. Really great!
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