My Image Of You Is A Broken Heart.

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my image of you is a broken heart
I’m falling through the cracks
where it’s cold
where it’s dark
where the blood doesn't flow
and the light doesn’t reach
what's running through my veins is
my twisted shame
I'm the one to blame for following
your games
like a little lost lamb that wanted
to believe
you could ever be more than
everyone deceived
but you weren't
and I know you won't change
so this shame, it will stay
for I was blind
now I’m poisoned with your betrayal
I should've seen the signs
but still imprinted with your love
I can't get you off my mind
my image of you is a broken heart
forever will it bind





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distant_dreamer said...
Sept. 1, 2009 at 11:42 pm
I love it all! Can you please tell me how you got to make a poem flow so like this? GREAT JOB!!!! 5 STARS!! Check out my work, and tell me what I can do to fix it!! Thanks a billion!
Your friend,
Distant_Dreamer
 
Allie225 said...
Aug. 31, 2009 at 2:54 am
wow,that was amazing, and you wrote this just on the top of your head? thats a true writer :) It takes me weeks to write something even remotely close to that. Keep up the good work.
 
Meghan said...
Aug. 31, 2009 at 2:12 am
Amazing poem.
 
Tears2Roses said...
Aug. 28, 2009 at 1:30 am
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Wow.... that was so dark!I like when things arnt all happy all the time. when people hear the word poetry they think happy but half the time their wrong!!! GO YOU!!!!
 
writingsavedmylife This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 25, 2009 at 1:23 pm
i absolutely adore this poem. i can relate to it so well and the rhyming is great.
 
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