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If You Knew,

August 18, 2009
By Nicole B BRONZE, Blaine, Minnesota
Nicole B BRONZE, Blaine, Minnesota
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Click.
Another photo.
Another special memory,
Kept inside the edges of a picture.

Click.
Beauty caught in action,
Hidden in the chaos of society.

Click.
The radiant smile of a girl
Captured by the lens of a camera,
Leaving people wondering
What made her so happy.

Click.
The adrenaline and excitement of a boy
After getting his first goal out on the field;
His face shining bright with glory.

Click.
Capture lost memories.



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on Aug. 28 2009 at 1:16 am
NascentNovelist GOLD, Syracuse, Utah
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The "clicks" add a rhythm to the poem that makes it addictive and impossible to stop reading. Congrats on this impressive piece.

on Aug. 25 2009 at 9:34 pm
Vashali Jain BRONZE, Oakhill, Virginia
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I love the poem! i mean u realy describe y pictures can be so precious. and different people experiencing different things that are all caught in a photo. click.

on Aug. 25 2009 at 7:03 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

i love how you looked at memories though a camera right? very creative. very true. the style of your poem is very unique, but i like it lots :) congrats on a good poem! check out some of my work if you get a chance, i would appreciate the feedback. also, write some more!!