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I get queasy and ill whenever you’re around.
I can’t utter word
I can only stutter,
Or else say something I wish I hadn’t.

I don’t think I’ve ever heard a thing you’ve said,
I’ve been trying to ignore rockets in my head.

My head is spinning
I think I might faint
Blood is rushing to my face
At a speed too great to calculate.

My eyes won’t listen
When I tell them not to stare.
They’ve got a mind of their own,
And so does my heart.

Ach! What have you done?
Quick! Somebody call 911!

Falling in love? Hah!
More like tripping on an untied shoelace,
Rolling down a hill, and off a cliff
In to the swirling depths
Of a river that’s about to go over a waterfall.

Now you tell me
The odds of landing on my feet.




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BannedGeekII said...
Aug. 27, 2009 at 6:28 am:
I love the ending. Very good poem. Keep writing. You get your point across very well.
 
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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 25, 2009 at 7:12 pm:
very good :) i really enjoyed reading this. you explained all the feelings so well. I love the second to last stanza and the last stanza, those are for sure my favorites :) but it's a really good poem. BRAVO :) check out and comment/rate some of my work, i love the opinions. oh and im giving this piece 5 stars :) great job!
 
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