first love

August 17, 2009
By joannielovesyou SILVER, Verdun, Other
joannielovesyou SILVER, Verdun, Other
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the one crush became
the one to hold my heart,
the one who holds my hand
and stands beside me ,
he knows every line to tell
every secert ive held,
hes arms are always open
when the tears drop down,
the strenght between us
is as strong as the heart
beat that keeps me awake,
ill remember that first hug
ill rememer that first kiss
& how fast i blushed ,
the fear of messing up
made my heart race just as fast
it seemed like no fear in them eyes
no worrie to mess up
but in the end i learned you were just as shy,
no matter how long it last
ill remember your my
Fist love <3

The author's comments:
its about the realtionship im in now && my first love
please leave a comment on what you think :)

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This article has 2 comments.

on Sep. 3 2009 at 11:01 pm
joannielovesyou SILVER, Verdun, Other
5 articles 0 photos 3 comments
aww thanks:)

and thats great!

good luck with that

on Aug. 28 2009 at 2:09 am
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
61 articles 36 photos 216 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

I love it! I'm in love now and I'm just finding out that he might love me back. :-) keep writing!

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