August 16, 2009
By yummixox3 GOLD, Revere, Massachusetts
yummixox3 GOLD, Revere, Massachusetts
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I wonder what it would be like
to travel in a space ship,
just burst into our universe
and take that wondrous trip.
I’d see our humungous sun
and mercury run fast to.
I’ll pass by Earth’s fiery twin Venus
who has about no moons.
Mars would be next to see,
with a temperature high at Fahrenheit 68 degrees.
As Jupiter passes by,
I notice it has a big red eye.
Saturn was next to show,
only 2 planets left to go.
Uranus is next in our little game,
its atmosphere composed of water, ammonia, and methane.
Neptune the water god is last
and now that’s that

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I love basketball! I watch it on TV all the time. Gotta love those Celtics!. I play basketball, gymnastics, softball and that's about it. I can also sing and draw as well<3

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