dad i need you

August 15, 2009
By Anonymous

dad i need you i want you i want you by my side i want to fall in tears cuz, you ain't in my life its like you dont care i want to Hear you say "Honey i love your everytHing to me nomatter wHat" everytime i Hear your name i want to cry like a baby you are my dad i know but dad i need you in my life i dont want to walk alone


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i need my dad He needs me too

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amaranth178 said...
on Apr. 26 2010 at 9:25 pm
amaranth178, Washington, District Of Columbia
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The piece could use some editing but the ideas behind it are so pure and....raw...it's gorgeous, if you don't mind my saying. The world definitely needs more fathers. We need fathers who will be there in every positive way to help build this world back to who we were meant to be.

In short, the work could use some proofreading (unless you meant for it to be this way, in which case, you're fine) but the emotion and the message are great.



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