Temptation

August 23, 2009
By Casey Loew GOLD, Newport, New Jersey
Casey Loew GOLD, Newport, New Jersey
14 articles 5 photos 1 comment

Pulled closely in

His words in her ear

Tingle down her back

Like a secret still unclear


She can feel his heat

Taste his breath

His fingers trace her every curve

Delicate and smooth


She can’t hold on much longer

Damn his touch makes her feel so warm

She pulls him in tighter

She doesn’t want to let this end


He kisses her again

This time soft and smooth

His eyes tell her story

Her heart’s in his hands



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on Aug. 26 2009 at 12:47 am
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
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The first stanza is fantastic, but you kind of lose the charm the rest of the way.




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