What happened between us

August 23, 2009
By Ashleen Harman BRONZE, Austin, Texas
Ashleen Harman BRONZE, Austin, Texas
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what's going on, tell me now why aren't you talking to me? what did i do wrong?
we used to be so close we told each others so much, and now everything is done
i can't be mad at you we were friends since the past
how can i keep up with this.... it's not like me, i need to talk to you...
i remember all the adventures all the trouble all the memories we have... now they're gone ....
i wanna know what's the matter with us???
we never been this far from each other and i don't wanna start a fight that i don't even know
what's about... i don;t wanna end up as nothing in your life...


The author's comments:
this piece was inspired by my best friend when we had a fight and we weren't talking to each other so it was sad very sad. so since i felt sad i decided to write about it. I want to know if it was good.

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on Aug. 26 2009 at 12:38 am
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
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It would be better if your lines were broken more properly or made them easier to read to give it a better flow.


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