My Mind

August 21, 2009
By Eureka-Chan BRONZE, St.Louis, Missouri
Eureka-Chan BRONZE, St.Louis, Missouri
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My mind is like a dark room
One way in, no way out
Alone, unloved, unappreciated, invisible
I have a smile on my face but hurt in my heart
I was thinking about my feelings, my friends, my life, my privacy
My mind is like a wall
Blocking out emotion, letting in thoughts
My thoughts, my memories, my ideas, my brain
My mind is a mystery, my mind is wild, hard to understand
Hard to open, hard to let out , hard to let go
My mind is like my own room or way to let go of all pain
Sadness , gladness, madness
My mind is the book of all things about me
Or walls around it called a brain
My mind is a prison or chamber of all things in a person
A person like me


The author's comments:
I wrote this poem for a grade in english class. If it wasn't for my middle school teacher Ms.Pickett I wouldn't have wrote this.

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on Aug. 2 2010 at 8:55 pm
DannyKid33 PLATINUM, Pleasant Hill, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't ever let the media tell you what to look like. You're beautiful the way you are. Stay beautiful, keep it ugly." - Gerard Way.

Wow. This is incredible. I have never heard a poem quite like this and the way you described it all was absolutely amazing. You should definetly be proud of this poem and i wish i could write like you. Good job and never stop writing


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