Summer

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I walk down the cobblestone pathway
The wind whispers at my ears
A plethora of daisies engulfs the green grass
I stare up at the bright blue sky
I start to wish it would be summer forever





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Poetandiknowit said...
Sept. 9, 2009 at 8:12 pm
I love love love your poem. I can picture what you're saying perfectly.
 
mofo said...
Aug. 31, 2009 at 6:56 pm
grrrreat poem. you are very articulate and well spoken. this is my favorite poem so far :)
 
Hope_Princess said...
Aug. 24, 2009 at 10:24 pm
You mixed in a lot of awesome words to make a simple and extravagant poem.
And this was my first day back to school too, you have me dreaming of summer again...the good old days...
Keep writing, and great poem!!
 
dreamer_believer said...
Aug. 23, 2009 at 5:16 pm
i know exactly how you feel :) great piece, very true. lots of deep, meaningful words. check out some of my work and rate and comment, the feedback is awesome! keep writing :)
 
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