Summer

May 31, 2009
By Anonymous

I walk down the cobblestone pathway
The wind whispers at my ears
A plethora of daisies engulfs the green grass
I stare up at the bright blue sky
I start to wish it would be summer forever



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on Sep. 9 2009 at 8:12 pm
I love love love your poem. I can picture what you're saying perfectly.

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on Aug. 31 2009 at 6:56 pm
grrrreat poem. you are very articulate and well spoken. this is my favorite poem so far :)

on Aug. 24 2009 at 10:24 pm
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

You mixed in a lot of awesome words to make a simple and extravagant poem.

And this was my first day back to school too, you have me dreaming of summer again...the good old days...

Keep writing, and great poem!!

on Aug. 23 2009 at 5:16 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

i know exactly how you feel :) great piece, very true. lots of deep, meaningful words. check out some of my work and rate and comment, the feedback is awesome! keep writing :)




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