thinking about life

By , stillwater, OK
sometimes when i cry i think of suicide
and when i think of suicide i think about me dying
and when i think about me dying i think about family and when i think about my family
i think about trying
and when i think anout trying i think about hurting and when i think about hurting
i thnk about living and when i think about living i think about dying.





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music said...
Aug. 26, 2009 at 4:22 pm
thank you so much. these thoughts of mine are real but then i no i cant leave life just yet cause if i do i might miss out on the good things in life that waiting on me to reach them!thanx for the comments:)
 
A.N.Whitfield said...
Aug. 22, 2009 at 9:04 pm
I really like this. :D Good work. Although my thoughts usually take a turn more downward when they get to family.
 
SarahZ said...
Aug. 22, 2009 at 12:11 pm
wow thats a deep poem. its too true. Keep writing
 
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