thinking about life

May 29, 2009
By Anonymous

sometimes when i cry i think of suicide
and when i think of suicide i think about me dying
and when i think about me dying i think about family and when i think about my family
i think about trying
and when i think anout trying i think about hurting and when i think about hurting
i thnk about living and when i think about living i think about dying.


The author's comments:
i really do think about this 24/7!!

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on Aug. 26 2009 at 4:22 pm
HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
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thank you so much. these thoughts of mine are real but then i no i cant leave life just yet cause if i do i might miss out on the good things in life that waiting on me to reach them!thanx for the comments:)

on Aug. 22 2009 at 9:04 pm
A.N.Whitfield BRONZE, Eastanollee, Georgia
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I really like this. :D Good work. Although my thoughts usually take a turn more downward when they get to family.

on Aug. 22 2009 at 12:11 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

wow thats a deep poem. its too true. Keep writing




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