Dance.

August 20, 2009
By Torrzilla GOLD, Ames, Iowa
Torrzilla GOLD, Ames, Iowa
18 articles 17 photos 49 comments

You're always taking once step forward.
I'm always taking one back.

It's so tiring, this selfish dance of our.

You push me.
I push back, but always a little harder.

We spin, but we never seem to know when to stop.
But finally, when we do, it just doesn't feel right.

I can finally see the people around us, their voices reach my ear, I then begin to panic.
Our dance keeps going.

It never stops, but now everything is out in the open.
It's no longer just us.

Everyone is apart of it.
It's no longer a struggle but it's not completely the way it should be.

It's all wrong.
It's all right.
It's all...



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Torrzilla GOLD said...
on Sep. 2 2009 at 5:48 pm
Torrzilla GOLD, Ames, Iowa
18 articles 17 photos 49 comments
^_^ Thanks!

on Aug. 22 2009 at 11:13 pm
Writerzhand GOLD, Ball Ground, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
I wanna carry a piece of who I was before so when I hit the wall, I REALLY hit the wall.

Wow, this is excellent!!!! I love your comparison. Great job!


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