Falling Apart

August 20, 2009
By shelby_kat DIAMOND, Warren, Ohio
shelby_kat DIAMOND, Warren, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I can sum up everything I've learned about life in three words; it goes on." -Robert Frost


sudden anxiety
followed by blushing cheeks.
a little mistake
and my secret leeks.
i'm not what i said
i kno that i'm weak.
you should just leave now
i'm not what u seek.
my world is spinning
it's out of control.
i'm building a wall
my heart's on patrol.
i'm sorry i'm paranoid
but i see the girls stare.
i act like i can take it
but i really do care.
u deserve someone better
one who can truley be there.
i don't want to leave
but i'm though with this scare.
ur love is an addiction
and i'm though with this drug.
cuz when i was down
i just needed a hug.
u see us married
with our live's to achieve.
but i'm not looking for that
now i just wanna leave.
so many people
say we look cute together.
but that's just a marage
we are broken forever.
our connection is shattered
my heart's beating slow.
my stars are falling
and it's tied with a bow.
my dreams are of falling
down out of the sky.
but when i wake up
i ask myself, "why?"
death is approuching
with a gun to my head.
i should just end it now
i'm better off dead...


The author's comments:
this poem is written in pieces about every girl i kno and their troubles with relationships

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on May. 11 2010 at 8:26 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I love the last sentence . and I love the -a little mistake and my secret leaks. 5 stars captain.

on Aug. 21 2009 at 7:11 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

wow :) what else to say? it's all very true. the ending sentence really depresses me though. but very good filled with tons of feeling. the only suggestion i would make was to seperate the stanzas- but without even doing that it's still a great poem :) check out my work too!


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