When the Magic Begins

August 19, 2009
By very_literary SILVER, Ballwin, Missouri
very_literary SILVER, Ballwin, Missouri
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When darkness kisses the sky,
Then the magic begins,
Stars dance on their ebon stage,
Soft, emerald velvety grass lies underfoot ,
A translucent moon sails on,
Fire's smoke is a wild, steamy perfume,
Insects chirp their serene songs of nature,
Trees hold the sacred peace in their long, outstretched arms,
And the hours of fantasy go by. . . ,
Now silver begins to streak the velvety black sky,
And the magic is slowly ebbed from the world,
Then morning embraces the universe


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qwerty42 said...
on May. 26 2010 at 11:45 am
wow...this is beautiful! :)

on Apr. 25 2010 at 6:58 pm
SonOfApollo GOLD, Katy, Texas
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WOW

:)


on Dec. 14 2009 at 6:40 pm
sophietle BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"As is a tale, so is life: not how long it is, but how good it is, is what matters." - Seneca

Wow! "When darkness kisses the sky... Trees hold the sacred peace... Morning embraces the universe"...What a zinger!

on Nov. 2 2009 at 4:06 pm
very_literary SILVER, Ballwin, Missouri
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Thanks for whoever takes the time to read my poem, the only thing I could ask for more of is comments and some ratings please.

on Oct. 29 2009 at 6:54 am
very_literary SILVER, Ballwin, Missouri
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Please post some more comments, I love them and they help me out a lot in my writing.

momiko BRONZE said...
on Aug. 22 2009 at 5:47 am
momiko BRONZE, Carlsbad, California
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I love the line "Trees hold the sacred peace in their long, outstretched arms". I suddenly feel as though morning could actually hug (not slap) me tomorrow. Fantastic job!

on Aug. 21 2009 at 7:13 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

great job! :) your description is amazing!!! i can picture everything. it's very good from beginning to end! keep writing :) and check out some of my work and comment, i love the opinions. great job with this one :)




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