When the Magic Begins

When darkness kisses the sky,
Then the magic begins,
Stars dance on their ebon stage,
Soft, emerald velvety grass lies underfoot ,
A translucent moon sails on,
Fire's smoke is a wild, steamy perfume,
Insects chirp their serene songs of nature,
Trees hold the sacred peace in their long, outstretched arms,
And the hours of fantasy go by. . . ,
Now silver begins to streak the velvety black sky,
And the magic is slowly ebbed from the world,
Then morning embraces the universe





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qwerty42 said...
May 26, 2010 at 11:45 am
wow...this is beautiful! :)
 
SonOfApollo said...
Apr. 25, 2010 at 6:58 pm

WOW

:)

 
daughter_of_athena This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 14, 2009 at 6:40 pm
Wow! "When darkness kisses the sky... Trees hold the sacred peace... Morning embraces the universe"...What a zinger!
 
legolas_elf said...
Nov. 2, 2009 at 4:06 pm
Thanks for whoever takes the time to read my poem, the only thing I could ask for more of is comments and some ratings please.
 
legolas_elf said...
Oct. 29, 2009 at 6:54 am
Please post some more comments, I love them and they help me out a lot in my writing.
 
Molly K. said...
Aug. 22, 2009 at 5:47 am
I love the line "Trees hold the sacred peace in their long, outstretched arms". I suddenly feel as though morning could actually hug (not slap) me tomorrow. Fantastic job!
 
dreamer_believer said...
Aug. 21, 2009 at 7:13 pm
great job! :) your description is amazing!!! i can picture everything. it's very good from beginning to end! keep writing :) and check out some of my work and comment, i love the opinions. great job with this one :)
 
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