Broken Heart

August 1, 2009
By ALIYAH WOODS BRONZE, HAMPTON, Georgia
ALIYAH WOODS BRONZE, HAMPTON, Georgia
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I waited everyday for you to call,
everyday for you to give me the sligtest glance,
and when we finally got together it was the closest thing to romance.
You were the very first person I kissed,
the whole time we were together was a bliss.
It was a bliss the days we argued made up and made out.
It was even a bliss the time you actually made me pout.
The only thing I regret is your death.
I regret the way you left me without the least good-bye.
I never gave you a chance to apologize for all the cheating you done.
I told you that you were dead to me,
but I didnt know you would die without me.
When I found you hanging outside my door on the way to your house it took me away too.
I died right on that porch from a sudden shock.
And even now I still want to call you 'boo'.
This is so bazaar.
But I just want you to know that since we are both 'up high' now that my halo is still ajar.
I am only waiting for you to take me back,
each moment with out you would be better if I had a heart attack.
I know that your heart is broken,
I just hope that it can continue working.
Still in Heaven im still lacking something
and that something is you.
I already had the something borrowed,new and blue.
I know your heart is still afar,
but notice that my halo is still ajar.


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on Aug. 21 2009 at 2:17 am
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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omg that was really good but slightly almost...scary cuz thats the last thing i'd ever want to be appart of and i think thats what drew me in to it...good job!

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on Aug. 20 2009 at 6:57 pm
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi

Wow, this is sad an beautiful and I love the part with the halo being ajar. I hope this isn't true, God, that's an awful thing to happen to someone.

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on Aug. 20 2009 at 6:47 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

wow! you did a great job writing this, i love the last sentence especially. very emotional :) check out some of my work and comment, i love the feedback. and keep writing, you have talent


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