My Heart.

April 26, 2009
By Anonymous

My heart is like a wave on a beach-
Pining for you, but you're so out of reach.
Tides flowing in and out-
Bringing only agony back about.
As the tide goes up, it reaches for sin-
But this sin only brings pain and sorrow back in.
I feel your lonliness, I hear your cry bellow-
I wish to reach out, at least get to say hello.
But between us lies an enormous gate-
And this gate is known as the gate of fate.
So I stand here staring in ecstasy-
Wishing you would just glance back at me.
Though we are so different, we are also the same-
If only we didn't come in the package we came.
My heart urns for you, but you're so out of reach-
My heart is just like a wave on a beach.


The author's comments:
This piece I wrote for my friend and dedicate it to her relationship, because she has to hide it from everyone since it is with a girl and not a boy. I hope that people may at least get a glimpse into the mind of a teenage girl who is alone because society wont accept the way she wants to be.

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on Aug. 16 2009 at 7:55 pm
MeghanMichelle GOLD, Hooksett, New Hampshire
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Amazing. I love how your comparing your heart to a wave. Very creative.

on Aug. 16 2009 at 5:05 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

Hmmm, not sure how to comment. You wrote the poem really well and it really does give you a new perspective. Looking back at the poem there are little details that hint that the relationship is... different but until I read your comments I would've never guessed. I love it! nice work!


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