My Heart.

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My heart is like a wave on a beach-
Pining for you, but you're so out of reach.
Tides flowing in and out-
Bringing only agony back about.
As the tide goes up, it reaches for sin-
But this sin only brings pain and sorrow back in.
I feel your lonliness, I hear your cry bellow-
I wish to reach out, at least get to say hello.
But between us lies an enormous gate-
And this gate is known as the gate of fate.
So I stand here staring in ecstasy-
Wishing you would just glance back at me.
Though we are so different, we are also the same-
If only we didn't come in the package we came.
My heart urns for you, but you're so out of reach-
My heart is just like a wave on a beach.





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Meghan said...
Aug. 16, 2009 at 7:55 pm
Amazing. I love how your comparing your heart to a wave. Very creative.
 
xXsmileXx This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 16, 2009 at 5:05 pm
Hmmm, not sure how to comment. You wrote the poem really well and it really does give you a new perspective. Looking back at the poem there are little details that hint that the relationship is... different but until I read your comments I would've never guessed. I love it! nice work!
 
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