Who Was I?

April 20, 2009
By Anonymous

Who were you, who did you make me become?
My abandoned heart only sheds a tear.
Destroying my soul.
These bruises you left.
If only I could express myself?
Let everything pour down!
Like the blood from the sharp blade deepens into my wrist.
Who was I?
The scared little girl, endless tears, depended upon!
You and me.
My body went numb.
Only to feel your hand rumble against my thigh.
Pain, I felt!
What had you become?
Who had I become? Letting this happen.
Tears poured down, pelted to the floor!
You killed my bitter soul.
The little tears I have left aren't to be wasted.
Only on another fool like you!
Who was I? Who had I become?
A scary person taken advantage of!
Beneath her true self. Live, a beautiful girl!
Hidden beneath the marks.
Who I was?
Not who I am today,this isn't me!
It's just who I was!

The author's comments:
I had gone through a time in my life where i was sexually assaulted and beat by my ex boyfriend for about 1 1.2 years. I thought I have to get my feelings out, and I decided to write this. I hope people will notice the red flags that I didn't notice and that they will get away from the relationship they have with this person. Good luck!

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Zero_K DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 14 2009 at 6:30 pm
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi

I agree with SweetXxXTart18. Good job.


on Aug. 14 2009 at 2:55 am
OfMiceAndAngel PLATINUM, Westminster, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
You have so many options in life. Never make giving up one of them. ♥

wow thats... wow strong point and opinion 5 out of 5 great poem but a hard thing to go thru to write it


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