Who Was I?

April 20, 2009
By , danbury, CT
Who were you, who did you make me become?
My abandoned heart only sheds a tear.
Destroying my soul.
These bruises you left.
If only I could express myself?
Let everything pour down!
Like the blood from the sharp blade deepens into my wrist.
Who was I?
The scared little girl, endless tears, depended upon!
You and me.
My body went numb.
Only to feel your hand rumble against my thigh.
Pain, I felt!
What had you become?
Who had I become? Letting this happen.
Tears poured down, pelted to the floor!
You killed my bitter soul.
The little tears I have left aren't to be wasted.
Only on another fool like you!
Who was I? Who had I become?
A scary person taken advantage of!
Beneath her true self. Live, a beautiful girl!
Hidden beneath the marks.
Who I was?
Not who I am today,this isn't me!
It's just who I was!

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Zero_Kiryu This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 14, 2009 at 6:30 pm
I agree with SweetXxXTart18. Good job.
SweetXxXTart18 said...
Aug. 14, 2009 at 2:55 am
wow thats... wow strong point and opinion 5 out of 5 great poem but a hard thing to go thru to write it
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