April 20, 2009
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The lights are distant
The sound is a mumble

The car is foggy
Everyone's laughing

Through the black Forest
There is a barn

My heart is pounding
We found the rave.

The lasers melt into eachother
One massive wave of light

The sound pounds my chest
My body's numb, but I feel every nuance

Music is god for a night
And it is taking us to heaven.

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ohaylianna said...
Aug. 16, 2009 at 12:06 am
wow. this is amazing.
Zero_Kiryu This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 14, 2009 at 6:31 pm
I love this poem. I think you achieved the intended effect.
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