Discoholics

April 20, 2009
By Alex Hunt BRONZE, Mattawan, Michigan
Alex Hunt BRONZE, Mattawan, Michigan
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The lights are distant
The sound is a mumble

The car is foggy
Everyone's laughing

Through the black Forest
There is a barn

My heart is pounding
We found the rave.

The lasers melt into eachother
One massive wave of light

The sound pounds my chest
My body's numb, but I feel every nuance

Music is god for a night
And it is taking us to heaven.


The author's comments:
Being a Techno DJ, I encounter alot of underground events like the one portrayed here. I know that just telling a story of my weekend doesn't paint a vivid enough picture for the listener, so I wrote this poem to inject some feeling.

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on Aug. 16 2009 at 12:06 am
ohaylianna BRONZE, Fitchburg, Massachusetts
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wow. this is amazing.

Zero_K DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 14 2009 at 6:31 pm
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi

I love this poem. I think you achieved the intended effect.

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