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Jack and Jill.
Far away but staying close,
I know that they miss each other the most.

The are always so busy.
There's no time to talk.
So Jill sits in her room,
and cries quite a lot.

With her friend by her side,
she trys to believe.
That because of what they have,
That he won't really leave.

Their relationship is still black and white-
when they become a couple,
they will be full of color and life.




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bpjrobert said...
Sept. 25, 2011 at 7:49 pm:
This is good. I liked the rhymes.
 
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kiwi12 said...
Aug. 18, 2009 at 7:30 pm:
very cute, I like this one too. You definitely should write more of these.
 
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