Midnight Talk

August 10, 2009
By tor10jax GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
tor10jax GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
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Waiting in bed,
in the dark.
A second, a minute, an hour.
Until finally,
the light flicks on.
A shadow emerges.
He's ready to talk.
Give me advice on anything I need.
Life.
The future.
The past.
We've discussed them all.
Some, more than once.
Tonight's topic: Chemistry.
Not boy chemistry.
School chemistry.
The chemistry that destroyed my self-esteem.
I need these talks.
They keep me going.


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iwantcoconow said...
on Sep. 27 2009 at 2:50 pm
iwantcoconow, Bronx,ny, New York
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super cool poem

on Sep. 19 2009 at 12:04 pm
TheRightToDream SILVER, Fort Frances, Other
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I'ma just gonna agree with everybody else and say it was great :D. It raises questions that the reader wants answered, and it's very intriguing.

on Sep. 7 2009 at 6:40 pm
sarahhope BRONZE, Stevinsville, Michigan
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very awsome

amyxu said...
on Sep. 1 2009 at 7:10 pm
Very cool. I like the "in the moment" feel that all the fragments create. It really draws the reader in!

on Aug. 22 2009 at 11:12 pm
Writerzhand GOLD, Ball Ground, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
I wanna carry a piece of who I was before so when I hit the wall, I REALLY hit the wall.

Wow this is awesome!!!!!

Torrzilla GOLD said...
on Aug. 21 2009 at 1:23 am
Torrzilla GOLD, Ames, Iowa
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^_^ This is good :))) I really like it!


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